Young gun

This topic definitely needs some serious discussion as it is of very serious nature. Dreams of a kid:Often these are just silly little whims.If a kid scores a goal in ...

If anyone had to associate the word "adventure" with a poem it would be this one. The poem reminds me of Bon Jovi's song "Lost Highway". This looks like one ...

This is very light and happy piece that I've come across. You've talked about the theme of 'simple' joys in life.Enjoyment with friends is one of them.I liked the way ...

From this poem and clearly tell that this thought was one you get sometimes when you are not so busy. Though each one has his/her identity such as daughter,friend,teacher,sportsperson we ...

The poem ends on a very strong and painful note. The flashback of the memories is a very creative way of telling the reader about war.The realisation of the damage ...

This poem was not told conventionally like it generally is ,i.e. story form,which by the way,is perfectly is fine. I think the broken description is because of the tremendous fear ...

Though I am not quite good at understanding metaphors and hidden meanings,I still feel this was a good poem simply because of the description. The pride,arrogance and the sense of ...

You have some amazing storytelling ability. A big plus point for you is your ability to play with words which can be seen in every stanza. The hero/looser of this ...

Short,but very nice and effective is how I would describe what you have written. A little about the theme:This one was a common topic.People complaining about being ignored is something ...

The story in the poem is very good and there is not much to say for a critique. I'll just quote some lines I liked: The sun soon sets, The ...

I'm not familiar with what kind of poetry this is called so I'll just give an opinion. Eliminate the need to needlessly play around with words.Put more substance into the ...

What is needed desperately here is creativity.Time and again we here of people cribbing that the cant be themselves and they must put up a facade to be accepted. And ...

Your work just keeps getting better and better. Something so deep covered it such short sentences,yet done more effectively than a 40 line poem. In the first paragraph it comes ...

It takes skill to tell such a long story and still hold the readers attention.This one was interesting right till the end. The flow seems a little out of place ...

Your words have an amazing rhythm. Though the title has the word solitude we know that the first 3 lines are not about solitude, but staying alone to remember someone.You ...